Hello again this is my 100 Word count writing Term 3 and i have to write a story that is 100 words long. Don't Skip through the words please. It took me a long time to finish I really like it a lot. hope yous enjoyed reading it thank you.
Week 1
…then it began…
Once there were three boys. Their names are Bob, Tom and Jerry. They walk down the road to Tom's house. On their way play a game of tag and Bob was it then it began and Tom and Jerry ran away from Bob. Well Bob was after Tom well Jerry was heading towards the words for some weird reason. When Jerry got lost in the bush Tom and Bob were trying to find him but Jerry was lost so they tried to go to the bush where he disappeared but they couldn't find him so they thought he went North.
good job i fink next time you should do a bit more next time
ReplyDeleteYou've got some great ideas Xaviar,I just think your story needs tidied up a bit.By tidied up I mean,you need to re-read it to make sure it makes sense.Maybe you could catch up with me before school and we could go over it together.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week and thanks for sharing your learning with us.